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So I really need some help right now! I'm working on the cover as u see. But I can't get the cherry blossom tree blades to work -.- So I really hope someone do critique this one, because I really need it ! :O I really want this to look fabulous ^^

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:iconkairi292:
lol i know i already posted this critique on our comments, but i just realised you had the critiques suggestion on here ^^; my bad!! so anyways here it is :)

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Oh wow i like this!!! so far your doing great, i honestly LOVE how you did the grass there, and the tree as well, it shows a lot of effect added into there, for the blossom leaves, use the same brush as you had for making it, but shrink the size of the brush smaller, and mixed all kinds of pinks(including hot pink, and some dark red) added in there and just make like strokes all over (not too much or else it wont look decent, just in the area's it really need from light blotches and dark blotches) be imaginative!!

And if you still have troubles, look at blossom trees on google, also remember the lighting and shading areas on the tree as well give it a standing pop-out to make it feel real xD,and for the bark, add more color tones of brown to dark red, including some beige-yellow on the right, close to the wolf, to give it that bright look from the sun !! add more darkness at the top bark where the leaves are to make it feel more real x3!! as well maybe add some blossoms flying around or clouds, to give more into the back rather than just the sky , i hope this is what you wanted for critique on your backgrounds suggestions your doing amazing so far!!!
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:iconice-lion95:
I really love it! It is really beautiful! <3 For the cherry blossom tree, you can.. Google a pic, then dreaw like the "flowers" in a light pink colour, pluss a white, so it gets a "flow" :D

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:iconcreambox:
Okei! :3 Thankies for the tips honey! :D i'll try it out to night or tomorrow, depends if I going to read for the presentation tomorrow or not x3 :la:
:icongrowlingwestie:
What if you try outlining the individual petals? :meow:

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I really love this pic! great job! :D I suggjest that you try what :iconice-lion95: said! good advice! ^^
:iconcreambox:
that will going to take for ever x3 but I'll try every thing you say :la: :glomp: :heart
:icongrowlingwestie:
Awwww you don't have to but I think i would look nice. :)

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:iconkairi292:
:D oh wow i like this!!! so far your doing great, i honestly LOVE how you did the grass there, and the tree as well, it shows a lot of effect added into there, for the blossom leaves, use the same brush as you had for making it, but shrink the size of the brush smaller, and mixed all kinds of pinks(including hot pink, and some dark red) added in there and just make like strokes all over (not too much or else it wont look decent, just in the area's it really need from light blotches and dark blotches) be imaginative!!

And if you still have troubles, look at blossom trees on google, also remember the lighting and shading areas on the tree as well :) give it a standing pop-out to make it feel real xD,and for the bark, add more color tones of brown to dark red, including some beige-yellow on the right, close to the wolf, to give it that bright look from the sun :D!! add more darkness at the top bark where the leaves are to make it feel more real x3!! as well maybe add some blossoms flying around or clouds, to give more into the back rather than just the sky :), i hope this is what you wanted for critique on your backgrounds suggestions :) your doing amazing so far!!!

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